Month: March 2016

The Sunday is the best day.

This story starts on a cold Sunday,I just woke up and I opened my window l could feel the breeze go down my back and touch my feet. After waking up I did my daily prayers then I heard my mum call me to go get a bath.W

 

 

 

 

Descriptive writing

It was a morning when the beaming sun came up.The idea I get in my mind is that there is a lot of things going around and it seems that they are going to build something and I think the place stinks.”towering ziggurats of ten bricks”.This story starts on a cold Sunday and as soon as I opened the door the breeze hit me like a cannon,I was on my way to the shop then I saw something on the floor is that what I think it is.

fiction book review

The book that i read was called diary of a wimpy kid hard luck by Jeff Kinney the story starts out with Greg heffley’s(The main character)family was having a meeting about the importance of family and his mom was saying that family is forever.Then Greg talks about getting into a fight with his best friend and then he went to school and was a bit jealous because he saw Rowley (Greg’s best friend)with a girl,also Greg thinks that Rowley has change since he was with his girlfriend and Greg does not think that Rowley has his own opinions.Now Greg does not sit with Rowley any more and it was Greg’s birthday and his mom made all of his friends give him books instead and now his mom idea spread around the neighbourhood and all the parents started doing that with their children and now Greg has to run away from boys that have books in his neighbourhood because they might beat him up for what his mom did.          

My Plan

Thursday 17 March 2016

We were on our way to church like every sunday and the routine was the same take a bath,get dress and pray to leave my house.This would happen till this Sunday after church my mum was angry and was speaking to my dad in there room and was earsdropping to their conversion my mum said,I can’t take it any more he was so disrespectful don’t worry my dad said.I did not get what they were talking about then I heard my Dad say a bad word

Dialogue


Wednesday16 March

How is he

He is ok

Does he need help

He has all the help he needs

He does not use speech marks when people are speaking.The way we know is like when Diaz writes Nilda answered or when papi was finish Diaz made it say he said.The older man spent his time telling the kid to choses his friends wisely, but the kid didn’t want to listen.Leave it,it’s not that deep,they got him,let them solve it ,no his is my bro